Sara Ochs delivers another compelling destination thriller with This Stays Between Us, her sophomore novel that transports readers from the windswept coasts of Australia to the dusty expanses of the Outback, where friendships fracture as easily as bones under the relentless heat. Following her debut The Resort, Ochs continues to explore the dark underbelly of vacation destinations, proving that paradise often conceals the most sinister secrets.
The premise is deceptively simple yet devastatingly effective: six college students participate in Hamilton College’s Adventure Abroad program in Australia, a month-long adrenaline-fueled journey that includes skydiving, scuba diving in the Great Barrier Reef, and exploration of the country’s eastern coast. What begins as an Instagram-worthy adventure quickly deteriorates into something far more sinister when Phoebe Barton, the group’s most troubled member, disappears from the remote outback town of Jagged Rock and is presumed to have run away.
Ten years later, Phoebe’s remains are discovered, and the surviving members of “The Mob” – as they called themselves – are summoned back to Australia to face not only the police investigation but also the ghosts of their collective past.
The Architecture of Guilt and Memory
Ochs constructs her narrative through a clever dual timeline structure, alternating between Claire’s present-day perspective and Phoebe’s voice from the past. This technique creates a fascinating tension between memory and reality, allowing readers to witness the stark contrast between how events were experienced versus how they’re remembered a decade later.
Claire emerges as an unreliable narrator whose guilt permeates every page, while Phoebe’s past chapters reveal a young woman spiraling under the weight of jealousy, insecurity, and a desperate need for acceptance. The juxtaposition between these two voices creates the novel’s most compelling element – the gradual revelation that memory is as malleable as clay in the Australian heat.
The author demonstrates particular skill in portraying the toxic dynamics of group friendships during that volatile period between adolescence and adulthood. The Mob’s relationships feel authentically messy, marked by shifting alliances, sexual tension, and the kind of casual cruelty that emerges when young people are thrust together in high-pressure situations far from home.
Character Study: Flawed but Human
Phoebe stands out as perhaps the novel’s most tragic figure – a young woman whose desperate attempts to reinvent herself only accelerate her isolation. Ochs crafts her with remarkable nuance, avoiding the trap of making her either purely sympathetic or entirely unlikable. Her pregnancy revelation and the circumstances surrounding it add layers of complexity that resonate with larger conversations about believing women and the consequences of speaking truth to power.
Claire serves as our primary guide through this labyrinth of guilt and secrets, but she’s far from a reliable companion. Her own culpability in the events surrounding Phoebe’s death creates a fascinating moral ambiguity that drives the narrative forward. The revelation about her role in wielding the knife that contained Phoebe’s blood transforms her from victim to participant in ways that complicate reader sympathies.
The supporting cast – Declan with his Irish charm hiding deeper wounds, Adrien the defense attorney whose investigative skills mask her own secrets, Ellery struggling with loyalty versus truth, and Kyan whose wealth can’t protect him from danger – all feel like real people rather than thriller archetypes.
The Australian Gothic Landscape
One of Ochs’s greatest strengths lies in her ability to transform the Australian landscape into a character itself. The red dirt, oppressive heat, and vast emptiness of the Outback become metaphors for the emotional terrain the characters navigate. The author’s personal experience studying abroad in Australia clearly informs her vivid descriptions, from the tourist-friendly beaches of the Whitsundays to the harsh isolation of Jagged Rock.
The town of Jagged Rock serves as more than just a setting – it becomes a commentary on tourism’s economic impact on small communities. The revelation that the Adventure Abroad program’s cancellation devastated local businesses adds social depth to what could have been merely a scenic backdrop.
Structural Strengths and Narrative Tensions
The novel’s pacing deserves particular praise. Ochs maintains tension throughout the dual timeline structure, carefully parceling out revelations to maintain reader engagement without resorting to cheap tricks. The truth-or-dare game that becomes central to the group’s dynamic serves as both a plot device and a metaphor for the dangerous games people play with each other’s lives.
The author’s handling of the Tomas subplot – the death that preceded Phoebe’s disappearance – demonstrates sophisticated plotting. His snakebite death during Phoebe’s dare creates a cascade of guilt and blame that ultimately drives the novel’s tragic conclusion.
Areas Where the Sun Doesn’t Shine
While This Stays Between Us succeeds on multiple levels, it’s not without its flaws. The revelation of Josh as the ultimate antagonist feels somewhat rushed, and his motivations, while explained, don’t carry the emotional weight of the central mystery. Some readers might find his transformation from background character to primary threat less than fully convincing.
Additionally, certain plot conveniences strain credibility. The discovery of Phoebe’s phone and its convenient battery life stretch the bounds of believability, even within the thriller genre’s typically generous parameters.
The novel also struggles occasionally with its large cast of characters. While Ochs generally manages to give each member of The Mob distinct voices and motivations, some supporting characters from the present-day timeline feel underdeveloped, serving more as plot functions than fully realized people.
Themes That Resonate Beyond the Outback
At its core, This Stays Between Us explores the lasting impact of trauma and the ways guilt can poison relationships across decades. The novel’s examination of toxic friendship dynamics, particularly among young women, feels both timely and timeless. Ochs doesn’t shy away from depicting the cruel ways people can treat each other when self-preservation overrides loyalty.
The book’s exploration of economic tourism and its impact on local communities adds unexpected depth, while its handling of pregnancy, assault, and the consequences of speaking out connects to broader cultural conversations about believing women and supporting survivors.
Similar Reads for Thriller Enthusiasts
Readers who appreciate This Stays Between Us might gravitate toward:
The Guest List by Lucy Foley – Another group thriller with multiple perspectives and dark secrets
Little Fires Everywhere by Celeste Ng – For its exploration of toxic relationships and community dynamics
Big Little Lies by Liane Moriarty – Similar themes of friendship, secrets, and hidden violence
The Silent Patient by Alex Michaelides – Another psychological thriller with shocking revelations
Final Verdict: A Scorching Success with Minor Burns
This Stays Between Us confirms Sara Ochs as a rising voice in the destination thriller subgenre. While it occasionally stumbles under the weight of its ambitious plotting, the novel succeeds in creating a atmospheric, character-driven mystery that lingers long after the final page.
The shocking epilogue revelation about Claire’s ultimate secret provides the kind of twist that will have readers immediately wanting to revisit earlier chapters with new understanding. Ochs proves that sometimes the most dangerous adventures happen not in shark-infested waters or during extreme sports, but in the spaces between what we remember and what actually happened.
For thriller enthusiasts seeking atmospheric mysteries with complex characters and exotic locations, This Stays Between Us delivers exactly what its title promises – secrets worth keeping, even when they threaten to destroy everything in their wake. Just don’t expect to look at study abroad programs the same way again.